How to Write a Hook: 7 Tips That’ll Leave Readers Wanting More

by Kyle Chastain


So, you’re eager to learn how to write a hook?

A hook that grabs the reader by the collar, pulls them in and leaves them wanting more.

Well, you’ve landed in the right place. 

Whether you’re writing an email, essay, blog post, or book opening, this post is for you.

We’re going to teach you some specific strategies you can use to command a busy readers attention and turn your drab opening lines into interesting hooks that reel in readers instantly. 

Ready to learn the tricks of the trade and create hooks that resonate? 

Let’s go!

1. Plant a Question Seed

You might think, “Surely, throwing a question straight off the bat could confuse my reader.” 

Remember, that’s the beauty of this approach.

A well-crafted question can pique curiosity, not confusion. Think of it as fishing. 

The question is your bait. Your reader is the fish. You want your bait to be as enticing as possible. So, don’t just ask any question. Ask a question that compels your reader to seek the answer.

For instance, you’re writing about healthy eating. Don’t just ask, “Do you want to eat healthily?”

That’s too easy to answer.

Instead, try something like…

“Ever wondered why some foods make you feel like a superhero, while others leave you as drained as a three-day-old party balloon?” 

It’s unexpected. It plants a seed of curiosity. Who wouldn’t want to read on?

2. Consider Quirky Anecdotes

Here’s the thing about stories. We’re wired to love them. They bring worlds to life and engage our emotions. They transport us to a different world. 

Starting your piece with a personal story hook can be a powerful tool. Particularly a quirky or surprising one.

Stories grab readers attention and help create an immediate connection with your reader.

But you’re thinking, “What if I don’t have any quirky stories?” 

Don’t worry. The magic is in the telling, not the tale. 

Telling good stories is about highlighting the unusual in the usual.

Did a seagull snatch your sandwich at the beach?

Did you discover a philosophical graffiti on a random wall? 

These mundane experiences, when described vividly, can make great hooks. 

Let’s say you’re writing about decluttering. Instead of starting with, “Decluttering your home is essential…”, try this.

“Last week, I went fishing for my keys in the infamous ‘junk drawer.’ I found a lonely sock, a half-eaten candy bar, and… wait for it… a tamagotchi from ‘98 still miraculously beeping for attention.”

Now, who wasn’t drawn in by this strong hook?

3. What About an Unexpected Quote?

a women surprised by how to write a hook

Using quotes is a classic way to start an article. But we’re twisting it a bit here.

Don’t rely on quotes from famous thinkers or successful entrepreneurs. Think of sources that resonate with the readers but are out of the ordinary.

Take quotes from popular culture, for example. Movies, songs, TV series — they’re filled with lines that can give a fresh start to your article.

Writing about teamwork? 

Forget the standard business guru quotes. Try something like…

“As they say in The Three Musketeers, ‘All for one and one for all,” — and that, my friends, is the essence of effective teamwork.”

The unexpected quote works. Why?

Because it breaks the monotony and serves as a great ice-breaker. It builds an instant bond with your reader over shared cultural references. 

So, go on, surprise your readers. Win them over right from your opening line.

4. Add Unusual Facts

Who doesn’t love a good trivia tidbit, right? 

The brain is a sucker for novelty. So, presenting an unusual fact at the start can be an effective hook to grab attention. It can coax the reader into your narrative.

Say you’re writing about the benefits of coffee. Starting with “Coffee helps you wake up” is just, well, flat. 

But what if you start with…

“Did you know Beethoven was such a coffee fiend that he counted 60 beans per cup to brew the perfect concoction?” 

Now, that’s a caffeine kick!

You might wonder, “How do I find these unusual facts?” 

Welcome to the age of the internet.

Pick a topic relevant to your piece. Dive into the online rabbit hole of trivia. Read articles. Browse blogs. Even join forums. 

Need a faster way? 

Just ask Chat GPT: “What is some interesting trivia about [your topic]?”

As with anything, just double-check your results for accuracy.

You’ll be surprised at the gems you’ll find.

5. Create Misdirection

A cat dressed as a super hero

Now, this one is fun for both you and your reader! It’s like setting up a magic trick.

Your reader is expecting a bunny out of the hat, but you pull out a pigeon instead. This unexpected twist can really hook the reader. It can make them stick around for more surprises.

You might think, “But isn’t this a risky strategy? Could I end up just confusing the reader?”

Here’s where finesse comes into play. The goal isn’t to confuse, but to tease the reader’s expectations. The twist should be unexpected, yes. But it should still tie into your article’s theme. 

It should be clever and thought-provoking. 

If you’re writing about overcoming procrastination, don’t start with “Procrastination is a common problem…”

Instead, try…

“Do you ever feel like the only thing you’ve ever mastered in life is the art of procrastination?” 

It’s unexpected and a bit cheeky. And it surely leaves your reader wondering, “Yep, that’s me!”

With the misdirection hook, you’re not just offering information. You’re offering an experience.

Remember, your goal is to keep your reader glued to your narrative. And a well-executed plot twist can do just that! 

So, go on, don’t just write the expected. Deliver the exceptional.

6. Pop Culture Mashup

Here’s a fun strategy — try playing matchmaker! 

Take a topic from your article and pair it up with a popular culture reference. This can create a surprising connection that piques interest and builds instant rapport.

For example, if you’re writing about personal finance, you might start with…

“Ever wished you had a Time-Turner like Hermione Granger’s to go back and fix your money mistakes?”

Harry Potter fans would instantly feel a connection, and even those not into the Wizarding World would connect to the words “Time-Turner.”

The trick here is to ensure the pop culture reference complements your topic without overwhelming it. 

Remember, it’s a mashup, not a takeover!

7. Try a Mysterious Metaphor

Picture this: “Writing a hook is like trying to lure a unicorn out in a meadow.” 

That sentence probably had you doing a double-take. And that’s the beauty of using abstract metaphors as hooks — they engage the reader’s imagination, making them pause, ponder, and keep reading.

But beware of the pitfall of being too cryptic. 

Your metaphor should intrigue, yes, but not at the cost of clarity. 

For example, if you’re writing about creativity, you could say…

“Unleashing your creativity is like trying to catch lightning in a bottle.”

It’s abstract and mysterious, but it still clearly indicates what you’re going to talk about.

Remember, your metaphor should not just be a decorative bow. It should add depth to your narrative, giving your reader a fresh perspective on your topic. 

Is Your Hook Any Good (Or Just Cheesy)?

An enticing pie

So you’ve written your hook, but how do you know if it’s any good? 

Think of your hook as the opening act of a concert. A good one sets the stage on fire, making the crowd roar in anticipation. A bad one, however, might have the crowd dozing off or, worse, reaching for their phones. 

So, what separates a killer hook from a snoozer? Let’s break it down with some alluring hook examples.

Good hooks are enticing, like a perfectly baked pie on a windowsill. 

Take this one, for instance…

“Why is a raven like a writing desk?” 

Intriguing, right? You’re itching to find out more. It’s a question, yes, but not just any question. It’s unexpected, it’s bizarre, and it yanks you into the narrative.

Now, let’s look at a not-so-great hook…

“In this article, we will discuss the similarities between ravens and writing desks.” 

Yawn! It’s straightforward, sure, but where’s the intrigue, the suspense, the pie-on-the-sill effect?

Good hooks tease the reader’s curiosity, while bad ones spoon-feed information. They leave a trail of breadcrumbs rather than serving the whole loaf.

A good hook might be…

“When life gives you lemons, squirt them in your enemy’s eyes!”

It’s bold, unexpected, and way more engaging than a stale, “In this article, we’ll discuss how to tackle adversity.”

In short, a good hook leaves the reader craving more, like a cliffhanger in a thrilling Netflix series. A bad hook, however, leaves them feeling like they just watched the entire series in the trailer. 

So, next time you pen down a hook, ask yourself — “Am I setting the stage on fire, or am I the opening act the crowd will forget?”

Write a Hook that Hooks

You’ve made it! It feels a bit like a rollercoaster, doesn’t it? 

That gnawing feeling of, “Can I really write a captivating hook?” It’s completely normal, friend. 

Now, you’re not just armed. You’re loaded with strategies to turn your first lines into bait to level up your creative writing

Remember, great writing is an art.

Like any art, it takes practice. But with these techniques, you’re on your way to captivating hooks that will have readers begging for more. 

So, take a deep breath.

Lean into that keyboard and get to work.

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Kyle Chastain

After spending several years in the banking world, Kyle Chastain ditched the tie, button-down, and grumpy clients to work from home in whatever he pleases. He has two small boys and, and as much as he loves working at Smart Blogger, his favorite job is being a dad and husband.


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Written by Kyle Chastain

After spending several years in the banking world, Kyle Chastain ditched the tie, button-down, and grumpy clients to work from home in whatever he pleases. He has two small boys and, and as much as he loves working at Smart Blogger, his favorite job is being a dad and husband.

1 thought on “How to Write a Hook: 7 Tips That’ll Leave Readers Wanting More”

  1. The seed question or any type of question, really, brings increased engagement Kyle. The strategy is simple too but bloggers often overlook simple approaches to make things complex. Ask and readers just tend to answer in either reactionary fashion or by mindfully thinking through the query before answering.

    Big fan of the personal story hook too. Even though we can weave tales with seemingly mundane, day to day events, I’ve had some wacky experiences on the road that work nicely with a strong hook. We all have ample experiences to share for connecting with readers. Be transparent, tell your story and develop stronger bonds with readers.

    Sensational post.



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